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A OC fanfic. 1st chapter~♡ OC meets Kaito and is introduced to the academy!
Title: Sad Hello/Beautiful Goodbeye
First day♡
The end of another year means it’s time for a new adventure. The past few years haven’t done much to satisfy my craving for excitement. I’ve roamed the lively streets of London, explored the rich history of Germany, soaked up the vibrant culture of Brazil, and wandered through the ancient wonders of China, not to mention countless places in between. A hundred thousand miles across every time zone, and yet, here I am, still feeling a restless, empty, alone. At first, when the Institute asked for my help in capturing anomalies, I was exited. A witch working with them? That was unheard of, especially since we’re often seen as “volatile” and “unpredictable.” But as the months dragged on, the thrill faded, leaving me with the same old boredom.
“Next stop, Darkwick Academy, meow,” chirped a cheerful voice over the quirky metro intercom, pulling me out of my thoughts.
“Next stop indeed,” I muttered to the empty cabin, my voice bouncing off the metallic walls. “Maybe Tokyo will have something fun in store?” As the train came to a smooth stop, the doors slid open quietly, letting in a rush of cool, fresh air that smelled like damp earth. Stepping into the early morning fog that drifted across the platform, I headed toward the chancellor’s office. With the sun just starting to peek over the horizon, it seemed my only company today would be a surprisingly large number of cats. Some were carrying parcels, others had letters, and one, I was pretty sure, had a small drill tucked under its paws. Already, this was way more interesting than the sterile vibe of the Institute HQ. Where I’ve been rotting the past six months.
As I walked down the brick-lined road, a playful grey cat with bright green eyes dashed up to my feet, weaving around my legs. “Meow, meow!” it called, its collar jingling as a little note flapped in the breeze. Curious, I bent down and grabbed the note from its collar.
Mary,
I hope this note finds you well! Please meet me in my office so we can get you settled. I’m sure you’re exhausted from your travels. Our friend here will show you the way.
~C
I gave the kitty a scratch behind the ears, feeling a warm glow inside. “Lead the way, little buddy.”
“Meow!” it replied happily, darting off ahead of me.
And just like that, my first day at Darkwick Academy began.
By the time my meeting with Cornelius concluded, the sky bathed the academy in a warm orange hue, characteristic of my favorite early mornings. I navigated my way through clusters of students shuffling to their classes, occasionally catching an odd glance, but for the most part, I remained overlooked. Typically, my dark clothes and hair contributed to a background character vibe; however, my golden-rimmed green eyes often drew attention. I had never been one to crave the spotlight, unlike many of my sisters. The background suits me just fine.
As I focused on the rhythmic steps of my scuffed shoes, I made my way toward the old chapel Cornelius had mentioned. Counting the cracks in the brick-lined walkway, I was suddenly jolted to the side as a body collided with me. A blond boy’s face came inches away from my own, his wide green eyes staring down at me, his cheeks flushing a deep shade of red, nearly obscuring the freckles scattered across his face.
“OH MY GOD!” His loud exclamation startled me, prompting me to gently push him off. He scrambled to his feet clumsily, reminiscent of a fawn finding its legs. A small smile tugged at my lips. Though I could feel the disconnect between my feathers and my true feelings. It's safer to keep distance, goodbyes always come too soon. The boy was apologizing profusely, extending a hand toward me, which I accepted.
“I’m Kaito Fuji. I’m so, so sorry again. You aren’t hurt, are you?” He looked me over, and somehow, his cheeks seemed to redden even more. How cute.
“I’m quite alright, though I suggest you be a bit more careful in the future.” I glanced down at where his hand still held mine; his touch was pleasantly warm, not uncomfortable. Following my gaze, he quickly released my hand and held them up in a gesture of apology.
“Ah! Sorry again. Um,” he paused, clearly feeling awkward. “So, what’s your name? I don’t remember seeing you around before.” He offered a smile that mirrored the warm colors of the morning. I returned his smile, realizing that since I might be here for a while, it would be wise to play nice—at least to avoid potential enemies.
“Mary Baker. It’s nice to meet you, Kaito. You’re right; today is my first day at the academy. I hope we can get along well.” I put forth my best friendly smile. Kaito gasped slightly, and he seemed to tense up. Confused, I asked if everything was okay.
“Okay? Better than okay! How about I show you around? I’m free of classes right now anyway! We can even grab some lunch—my treat.” I nodded and we began walking together.
It seemed I had already made my first friend: Kaito Fuji.
Kaito led me to the dilapidated chapel, its squeaky floorboards groaning under our weight, while the boarded-up windows did little to enhance its charm. He insisted on going first, puffing up his chest and putting on a brave face that made me suppress a smirk. “It’s not so scary,” he declared, though I could see a flicker of nervousness in his wide eyes. “Just a little... character.” His cheeky grin was cute, but I couldn’t help feeling a twinge of amusement at his bravado.
As we climbed the stairs, I dropped my backpack at the top with a thud, the weight of it a reminder of my centuries of experience. “I’ll need to pick up some supplies soon,” I said, glancing at him with an arched eyebrow.
“Yeah, you definitely don’t want to run out of snacks or anything,” he replied, his voice playful. “A girl with a hangry mood? That’s a recipe for disaster!” He flashed me a teasing smile, his eyes sparkling. Very cute. Little does he know as a witch I rarely need to eat, but my identity is something best kept secret. Witch’s aren’t trusted among the few that know of our existence. For good reason, I suppose. The observations I was put through by the Institute for the past six months show how little trust they have.
I rolled my eyes, the corners of my mouth twitching slightly. “How noble of you to worry about my mood, Kaito. But I assure you, I’ve survived much worse than a lack of snacks.”
We hurried out of the chapel, the irony of a witch living in such a spooky place not lost on me. Kaito continued to guide me around the campus, his excitement palpable as he showed me the main building, classrooms, and even the teachers’ lounge. “And here’s the cafeteria,” he announced dramatically, arms outstretched as if revealing a grand prize. “Where all the best gossip happens! But, um, I might have a little hiccup…” He rubbed the back of his neck, cheeks flushing slightly. “I forgot my wallet.”
I couldn’t help but let out a dry chuckle. “And here I thought you were the brave hero of the day. It seems you’re just a boy who can’t keep track of his belongings.”
“Hey now, don’t go teasing me too much!” he protested, though the grin on his face betrayed his enjoyment of the banter. “You’re not going to let me starve, are you?”
“Don’t worry, I’ll make sure you get fed,” I teased, a smirk playing on my lips. “But only if you promise to keep that dimpled smile on your face. It’s quite charming, you know.” His face turned red.
“Ch-charming? Me?” he stuttered out and I couldn’t help but laugh.
We had a nice enough lunch, Kaito chitchatting animatedly about the different houses at Darkwick Academy. “So, there’s Frostheim, my house,” he began, his eyes sparkling with enthusiasm. “It’s full of mostly nepo babies—rich kids who think they own the place.”
“Sounds delightful,” I replied, rolling my eyes playfully.
“Then there’s Vagastrom,” he continued, a hint of disdain creeping into his tone. “We call them the ‘thugs.’ They’re tough, but honestly, I’d steer clear of them if I were you.”
“Noted,” I said, intrigued.
“Jabberwock is interesting, though. They run, like, an… anomaly safari,” Kaito explained, leaning in as if sharing a secret. “I’ll definitely be checking that out soon; it sounds like a blast.”
“Anomalies? Now that’s something I’d love to see,” I mused, my curiosity piqued.
“Hotarubi is another one,” he said, his voice brightening again. “It’s a house of artists. They’re all about creativity and expression.”
“And Sinostra?” I prompted, wanting to hear more.
“Ah, that’s the casino house,” he said, shuddering slightly. “And their vice captain, Romeo? Definitely someone to avoid. He’s a weird stalker,” Kaito grumbled, his expression reflecting genuine concern.
“And what about Mortkranken?” I asked, intrigued by the medical house.
Kaito shivered at the mention. “Ugh, don’t even get me started on the captain. Mad scientists are always a good time, right? Just don’t let them experiment on you.”
I chuckled, finding his reactions amusing. “And Obscuary? What’s the deal with them?”
“Honestly, I don’t know much about them,” he admitted, scratching his head. “You might want to investigate that one yourself. They’re a bit mysterious.”
“Sounds like I have my work cut out for me,” I said, a smirk playing on my lips. “Thanks for the intel, Kaito.”
Finally, we made our way to the convenience store, and I raised an eyebrow at the odd assortment on the shelves. The place had a strange mix of magazines and snacks, with far too many glossy covers for the amount of food. “Looks like they prioritize entertainment over actual meals,” Kaito remarked, picking up a magazine featuring a cat in oversized sunglasses. “What do you think? Should we get this for your ‘how to survive Darkwick Academy’ guide?” He held it up to his face, striking a silly pose that made me shake my head, both amused and exasperated.
As we wandered the aisles, I felt a mix of anticipation and amusement bubbling inside me. Maybe Darkwick Academy wouldn’t be so dull after all—especially with Kaito around.
#tdb#tokyo debunker fanfiction#tokyo debunker#fanfiction#fanfic wip#i welcome constructive criticism
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In honor of Yuri Week I present to you,
the lifestealers as women tierlist
#im not maintagging this#this hasnt been peer reviewed but i welcome your constructive criticism#actually i lied#it can show up in the lifesteal tag#lifesteal smp
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POV you are a some kind of demon or perhaps cambion
#this was meant to be a trans wyll art but i got a bit carried away lighting wise. so u can barely see the top surgery scars#bg3#baldurs gate 3#wyll ravengard#wyll#this is also part of a double feature with a younger wyll pic#for the Juxtaposition#but god knows when ill finish that one#bg3 fanart#teehee tell me what u think abt this one...constructive criticism welcome#art
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THE VALIDATION.
sypnosis: precious, sweet choso would never ever deny you in any way, always opting to let you do whatever you wanted for your own entertainment and satisfaction, even if it includes giving you his heart and body.
contents: tutor!choso, sub!choso, dom!reader, pet names (choso: cutie, baby, bubs, darling, pretty prince, good boy | reader: mommy), dirty talk, hair pulling (m!receiving), unprotected sex, semi-public sex (does this even count idk), choso is desperate for some puthy (YOUR puthy), overstimulation (m!receiving), praise kink
word count: 1.4k+
a/n: based on this idea by @hotlinemurder ! tysm to maki for blessing my tl with this idea and i hope i did it justice !! hope u enjoy !! minors dni. ageless / blank / minor blogs will be blocked if seen interacting!
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choso tutors you every wednesday and friday afternoon from twelve pm to two pm every other week in the university library. a timeline you both come up with to nicely accommodate both of your schedules- him with his studies and you with your parties and whatnot. not to say you don’t focus on school, you do, life’s just easier when you can ignore all the pending assignments that are due at 11:59pm and all the teachers that seemingly have it out for you.
but choso is sweet, unnecessarily so even when you try to quietly yawn at his rambling that seems to bounce off the walls of the study room you two rented. even when you start doodling in your notebook, when you’re supposed to be writing down what he’s trying to teach you. life is just more fun when you let go, something you’re sure choso doesn’t know how to do when you don’t show him how to.
choso is a straight-a student and tutor, teaching you topics better than any of your professors on the surface. but when you have him in the palm of your hand, with actions that are only a little suggestive? you’ll surely have him fucking you better than any of them too.
a few taps from the tip of a black pen on your notebook shakes you from your thoughts, choso gazing at you with concern evident in his eyes and a cute frown.
“you do know midterms are two weeks away, right?” the concerned lilt in his tone is cute but not cute enough for you to really care, knowing you would rather be doing anything else than studying calculus four.
you look up and smile apologetically, “sorry, cutie, but partial differentiation of functions is not on my mind right now.”
he blushes softly at the pet name but holds his ground, “but you didn’t come to any lecture last week. these questions are gonna be on the exam, you have to know them.”
you stand up, going behind him to undo the two buns he keeps atop his head, “‘s alright, i have you, don’t i?” the locks of hair unravel like a pretty present as you massage the mop around, evening the spread of his pretty brown hair.
“that’s why i’m trying to teach you right now but you won’t even listen,” he softly whines in slight protest, distracted by the feeling of your fingers combing through his hair.
“i have a better idea- don’t you wanna have fun?” you twist yourself onto his lap, thighs fitting atop his as you straddle him. you twist your hand into a fist to garner a hold of his hair, pulling it back to lift his head to expose his pretty wide eyes.
“b-but-” he stammers, moving his head to the side to avoid your eye contact, not sure what excuse to use. you roughly pull his hair again to force him to face you again, a mewl falling from his lips.
you cut him off with a soft voice, “you want me to stop?” you press chaste kisses to his jaw and throat, leaving an especially hard one on his adam’s apple, a soft sigh slipping out from his mouth.
he groans, unable to find an answer in his now-muddled brain. “please-”
precious, sweet choso would never ever deny you in any way, always opting to let you do whatever you wanted for your own entertainment and satisfaction, even if it includes giving you his heart and body.
“please what, baby?” you smile lightly, knowing he would always give into pleasure, give into you.
“please make me cum,” his usual honeyed, deep voice is exchanged for a separate breathy, higher tone that’s reserved for your ears and your ears alone.
“all you had to say, bubs,” you lightly grind your core to his hardening, twitching cock, that seemingly was begging for some sort of stimulation that could help relieve the hot bubble that was forming in his lower belly.
something between a whine and a groan erupts from choso’s lips as you go in for another kiss, you swallowing up his sounds by connecting your lips.
“we’re in the library, darling. remember to be quiet, ‘kay?” you remind him with a sweet smile as if you weren’t the reason for his loud volume.
he whimpers, “s-sorry, mommy, please-” he chokes out, “c-can i put it in?”
you reach down and pull his cock out of his pants and give it a few jerks. “do you deserve it?”
choso scrunches his face in pleasure, eyes shut and lips wet with both his and your saliva. he manages to open his eyes a bit and breathe out, “yes- yes i do- please?” his brown orbs plead with you for stimulation- for pleasure- for mercy.
“put it in then, show me how desperate you are for me,” his fingers are fumbling around, pushing your skirt up and realizing you’re wearing his favorite lacy violet panties underneath, he groans quietly to himself admiring the wet spot on it for a second. set back on his prior mission, he pushes his cock into your panties, creating a large wet spot as he humps the scratchy material to find pleasure.
“my pretty prince, right? look at you, you just wanna get off, huh? i’ll let you use my pussy- so you better use it well.”
“thank- you, mommy,” he mewls softly before aligning himself with your hole. he quickly shoves it in- catching you off guard, forcing a hiss and moan from your lips that he quickly shuts up with a kiss that you dominate early on.
his hands have you in a vice-like grip that’s sure to leave bruises, holding you a few inches above his own body as his hips uncontrollably rut up into you, balls slapping on your buttcheeks.
“f-fuck- what would your parents say about this, huh? their p-precious little boy so desperate to cum inside of a woman?” you bite his earlobe, moaning directly into it, only serving to make choso’s dick impossibly harder.
“do-don’t-”
“don’t what, bubs? don’t tell your parents? but with how much you c-cum inside me, won’t we have to tell them when we have a b-baby?” you chortle in his ear, his face tinted red from embarrassment but still rutting up into you, desperately searching for release that feels so close with the way you’re clenching around him, still wanting to cum inside you as if it was his lifes goal.
“c-can’t- please- please let me cum inside.” he nearly sobs, his orgasm feeling like it’s approaching.
“don’t stop, don’t stop. you’re doing so so good for me, bubs. keep going- just a bit more, you’re almost there, baby,” you whisper into his ear, keenly aware of the effect your words have on him.
“please, please, please- let me-”
“you wanna cum? you wanna cum in me? give your parents a grandbaby? you want that huh- you want your parents to know what a dirty whore you are for wet pussy- my wet pussy? come, come inside me.” your filthy words spill out of your mouth and into his flushed ear like whispers of an eternal bliss in hell.
a chain of “yes”s leave his lips in needy murmurs as he nears his climax. his thrusts into you become shorter and sloppier as you hug him closer, quieting your own moans by putting forth effort in marking up his neck.
a long, languid moan is ripped out from choso’s chest with his hips still rutting into you, albeit slower now, steadily fucking his cum into you, although his cock is still semi-hard. “let me- let me make you cum, please?”
you breathily laugh, “keep fucking me, baby, i’m almost there.”
choso continues his actions through strained movements, overstimulating himself, still roughly but quietly moaning through his own pain and pleasure. pulling you closer and staring at your pretty face filled with pleasure, he seems to be mesmerized by every feature on your face that contorts to prove that you were finding as much bliss in this as he is.
“fuck, i’m close, baby. gonna make me cum? make me cum,” choso quickens his pace, grunting in exertion. with a hand slapped over your mouth to hold back your shriek, you cum, spasming around his cock. fucking you through your orgasm, choso whines. he was so focused on making you cum that he didn’t realize he was nearing his second orgasm and with one last thrust into you, he spills a second load into you.
“good boy, choso. you did so well,” your validation makes him feel tingles all around his stomach, butterflies awakening in his stomach.
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a/n: honestly i hate this n i felt like it was WAY too fast paced. BUT i promised a fic so here's one amidst my busy schedule :') life stop fucking me in the ass when :/ thank you for reading !!!
#smut#jjk smut#jjk#jujutsu kaisen#choso kamo#kamo choso smut#jjk x reader smut#jjk x you#jjk x reader#choso smut#baby choso#i need him#part of the reason why i took so long finishing this was that i kept imagining it too hard in my mind and going insane....#constructive criticism welcome!#thank you for reading!
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✨Flowers underneath us now
Towers underneath us now
We walk above the city
You and I✨
#They™ reminded me of one of my fav songs so ofc I had to draw them#I may have gone overboard with the chromatic aberration but also that means rainbows 👀#any constructive criticism is welcome btw I'm really trying to improve my digital art#I know there are so many AMAZING digital artists in the MHA fandom so pls#lend me your wisdom o wise ones#also I could not find a single background colour that didn't wash them out in some way#so yeah thats as good as thats gonna get#My Hero Academia#mha#boku no hero academia#bnha#toga himiko#himiko toga#ochako uraraka#uraraka ochako#togachako#mha art#bnha art#digital art#kohei horikoshi
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I have put some effort into the abs and the other assorted muscles positive feedback is welcome
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If you're ever feeling like you're lost— I'll come find you.
Man all fronts, there's no ocean I won't swim across— To be right by you
#alan becker#animation vs minecraft#avm purple#avm green#avm grapeduo#sorry for no reqs!! i just really needed to get this out of my system#sorry also for the use of wish lyrics. in my defense they made me brain rot thus this#i also have been planning to draw art of them teehee..#perhaps an au soon..#also friendly constructive criticism welcome for green's hair!! i saw so many people draw them with protective hair styles so ><
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Speed-o'-sound Sonic wasn't fond of the cold.
He never was. He hated it. It was inconvenient. It made you more vulnerable, more dependent. Weaker.
In order to shape unbreakable ninja assassins, the village made sure to prepare them for all conditions and circumstances. One of them, being, of course, winter and its fanged white.
It was the training he loathed out of all. He didn't really hate any of his training, despite being in the lower class and having to undergo the most torturous exercises. If anything, he rather relished in them, took them on with manic enthusiasm.
The next morning he'd wake up with the usual blare of the morning alarm, and he'd drink in the sweet stings of his sores and bruises that stretched across the planes of his muscles. He loved knowing how strong he was getting.
In winter, the village would force them to train outside, bathe in the freezing lake, and sleep on the cold grass. They wouldn't even give them a futon. Only those who performed well that day were granted blankets, but they were practically useless due to how thin they were. It was almost a mockery.
Fortunately enough, they weren't so cruel to let them sleep on snow. Hence when the snow finally came and encased the green land, they would be allowed back into their shared rooms.
Regardless.
He hated the way his body shook with quivers under the moonlight, hated the hunger that made him curl further into himself and wrap his shivering arms around his abdomen tighter. He despised the fact that his classmates weren't struggling as much as he was. It was a genetic defect at best and a hindrance at most.
Even after so many nights, so many years, his body still hadn't adapted enough in deep contrast with the others.
Flash was a top performer at this point, and by some miracle hadn't discarded him and Sonic's 'companionship' of sorts. Flash alone knew about Sonic's incessant struggles. He noticed how quiet Sonic would get in winters, how his features would always foster a ghostly frown. Especially when they were eating their usual portions of tasteless stew, Flashy flash would steal a side glance at his friend, watching as he huddled into himself. Head low, back arched forward, shoulders high to level with his ears, and slim hand hurriedly taking one spoonful after the other.
Flash would wait to make sure that no one else was awake and all the mentors had gone off to shelter back in the village. Boldly, a boldness he had adopted from Sonic, he'd shuffle close to the shivering, silent mess of his friend, who refused to close his mouth so his teeth wouldn't rattle against itself
"Cold?" He'd whisper as he draped the light cloth over Sonic, then moved closer so they were both huddled beneath it. Sonic's eyelids fluttered open, brows still tilted in a deep sneer, frustrated by his state.
He shuffles closer to Flash. "This thing's useless." He refers to the blanket with a light quake in his hushed tone. The spindly thing did little to shield him from the icy breeze, basically cutting through the material.
Flash didn't mind the small puff of cold air hitting his face. He nodded. "Yeah. I only use it for some peace of mind."
Flash's arms outstretch and his hands press against Sonic's neck and back, drawing him into a quiet embrace. Sonic shifts closer with his companions's movement, his forehead resting on Flash's shoulder.
"Peace of mind." Sonic scoffs, leaning into Flash's warmth.
His curled body's trembles don't seize completely but ease under the arms enveloping him, the body curving around him.
The wrinkles lining Sonic's features slowly begin to smoothen out, and he concurs:
The winter's cold, but at least he's here. .
Sonic now understood the look Flashy flash spared him when he passed by the room, his gaze falling onto Sonic's sprawled form on the rusted bed, jaw clenching and hissing inhales as his hand clutched the mattress. At that moment, Sonic just so happened to open his squeezed eyes and meet Flash's oddly gaunt gaze.
Back then, it was unreadable. Now looking back, it probably was a parting glance. Not a 'goodbye' or 'farewell' glance. A parting glance.
That bastard.
He'd find him, and he'd settle the score with him. He hated him.
The city, with tall buildings and loud noises, was unkind to him. Not that it mattered to him. It didn't. He was unkind back.
His frame stiffens at the sharp pang shooting through his body. He sucks in a quick inhale between gritted teeth and carefully reattempts to lie down, trying not to place any form of pressure on the poorly bandaged wound on his side.
He was reckless and momentarily forgot about heroes, and greatly underestimated them.
And it was winter.
It was snowing, too.
At least he found a cave. But still, his body continues to shake vigorously.
He feels oddly empty. Not physically. Not because of the cold. Something gnaws at his insides. It strains at his heart and it laddens his already exhausted muscles.
And somehow it makes the cold bite, much, much deeper.
His face crinkles and constricts further.
The winter's cold, and he doesn't like that loneliness feels colder.
#one punch man#opm#opm sonic#speed o sound sonic#speed of sound sonic#flashy flash#one punch man fanfic#fanfiction#daisy loves angst#Flashy flash x sonic#intended to be platonic#hi faceless dude#platonic#sonic hates the cold#sonic and flash are around 11-13 maybe in the first part?#ill cross post this later on ao3#probably gonna edit it later#constructive criticism is welcome#Flashsonic#No happy ending i killed it like flash#Angst
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my naym is ring and wen im on i help yu hide mayk problems gon i shou yu things that ar ahed i binde yur soul i mess yur head
my naym is silm im genius-mayd i show yu things that ar long fayd and then I mayk everyone die i am so greyt i mayk yu cry
my naym is melk and wen thers feast wen time is rite or im just pist i go and maim finwe and trees i steal the rocks i mess the ryme i do the diss*
my naym is mai ron im perfect i have pet wolfs and i collect monsters and spells i live in bog cant keep an elf get bit by dog
my naym is nom and im so wyse i left my hom in paradyse i met som men i lernd wyrd stuff i likd the wolf that was enuff
my naym is kano i am a bard i mayk sad songs and i cry hard sindar hav gem so i them stab i go to beach and now im crab
my naym is fyre and I nou grif my dad was killd by petty thif i swer an outh of eternal yre i meet balrogs my naym is fire
my naym is mae my dad mayd stuff i talkd with morgoth more than enuff I did bad things i fell to fyre now im in halls i lik threds for vaire
#*cord#silm#lord of the rings#silm shitpost#lotr shitpost#bredlik#i lik the bred#constructive criticism of my understanding how to spell english phonetically welcome!#or of anything#and yes “i shou yu things that ar ahed” is a lie#what you expected the ring to not lie to you?#come on#not gonna do the good ones bc the form feels too disrespectful#melkor#morgoth#sauron#mairon#silmarils#(or you can read it about the book)#(works both ways)#ok not gonna do the good Ainur but may do some Elves etc#feanor#maglor#warning blatant repetition of rhymes 🤣
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[Image ID: Hero costume design for Ashido Mina. Below her horns, she has a pair of white rimmed goggles resting in her hair, the lenses being purple. She's wearing a cyan and purple sleeveless cropped top with a black hood, white fingerless gloves and white socks. She has a white belt with a high saturation blue/purple coloured belt buckle that is tied to both a pair of primarily purple and cyan shorts, as well as a baggy pair of black pants over top. The pants have cut outs at the sides, showing both her shorts and upper thigh, while ending mid-calf. Her shoes are made of thick material, her right shoe being purple with cyan straps, her left being cyan with purple straps. They both have cream soles. There are four additional diagrams showcasing various aspects of her costume, being her gloves (label: open for acid shooting & reinforced knuckles), a pouch on the back of her belt (label: pouch for acid neutraliser throwables), the thick soles of her shoes and an underview of said soles (labeled: holes for optimal acid skating). Text of image below:
cy[pH]er
outfit inspired by breakdance mixed with activewear for ideal hero usage
cypher is a breakdance term for a circle that breakers (dancers) form then dance in
stylised as cy[pH]er to emphasize the ph, referring to the pH scale for acid
fighting style is a unique blend of breakdance and capoeria with tweaks to improve quirk use
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aaaaand here is my ashido mina costume redesign!!! really happy w how the design turned out, not so sure on the drawing itself. drew it back in may and i've been looking at it ever since, so i've noticed a few things that i could fix, but its been too long so i'd have to redo the whole thing and ahahah no. may redo it in the future, but for now it gets the job done. it was deffo fun trying to draw mina, she's a dear favourite of mine so it was fun to play around with her inhuman appearance. i wasn't sure if i managed to capture my hc appearance of her, but her canines aren't sharp they're just kinda large and stick out slightly. there's a japanese term for it, yaeba, and it's generally regarded as a cute thing. also her tongue and inner mouth is more vibrant red, which i thought would go with her pink skin. her skin is pink due to her quirk and while using the ph scale, the highest strength acid is usually red. i thought it fit lol. also please praise me on the name, while i will forever adore her going as alien queen, i LOVE the unique-ness of cy[pH]er.
#my art#mha redesign#ashido mina#mina ashido#boku no hero academia#my hero academia#bnha#mha#locked out#also sorry if the image id is too long or too detailed or not detailed enough#my bestie who usually helps me w my image ids is currently asleep and i wanted to post it before ch13 goes up#and since im posting it before they wake up lol i might come adjust it if they see problematic parts#constructive criticism on my image ids are welcome on my art it is not
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Yeah I did NOT listen to y’all’s votes in the hair poll lmaoo 😭
#jesper fahey#shadow and bone#soc#six of crows#the grisha series#grisha trilogy#grishaverse#cowboy Jesper Fahey#If anyone has any art experience constructive criticism is welcome (CONSTRUCTIVE.)#jesper fahey fanart#soc fanart#I got a lil excited with the hair decorations 😭#I’m not black so tell me if they’re like unrealistic
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posting wip so i have the motivation to finish it eventually...surely i dont give up....
monitoring feat vero
#drdt#not putting all the tags bc its jsut a wip#artlying#veronika voice: let me see inside you#animating so hard wtf....how do people do this#i messed up the end but i dont wanna fix it oouuughhhhg#i also skipped the beginning frames where she gets up idk#what do people use for animatation is flipaclip even good?? its all i have#constructive criticism is welcomed! i maybe might be too lazy to fix it for this but at the very least ill keep it in mind lol#i love monitoring sooo much mmmMMWAHH!#lately all i want to draw is vocaloid redraws with characters it is sooo fun yay#however so often they require things above my skill level so i suffer#we power through regardless!! we on that Art Grind#ill work on this after the semester ends hopefully i am soo close#“finals week or my final week” as they say
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ROTTMNT screenshot redraw
#ROTTMNT#Unpause ROTTMNT#so I didn’t trace it so it’s a little rough#the body was the hardest part ngl#But honestly I’m pretty proud of it!#Constructive criticism is welcome#ROTTMNT Donnie#Art
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#sonic cinematic universe#tom wachowski#maddie wachowski#maria robotnik#reincarnation#criticism welcome#I can take criticism#constructive critism welcome#chris thorndyke#sonic 5#sonic 4#sonic fandom#sonic the hedgehog#sonic#sonic 3#sonic movie 3#sonic movie universe#sonic movie spoilers#sonic movie shadow#shadow the hedgehog#movie maria#movie polls#movie sonic#sonic x
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I had just finished a lil thing with poly!141 x fem!reader. However, I'm still new to the Tumblr posting mechanisms, and I accidentally deleted the draft I had saved 🤦♀️
Should anyone like me to rewrite it, I gladly will. Just know it wasn't very good lol, just a thought. Maybe once I get the hang of this more I can start turning them into actual fics.
#cod#cod mw2#call of duty mw2#soapghost#ghostsoap#poly 141#tf 141 x reader#task force 141#tf 141#kyle gaz garrick#simon ghost riley#john soap mactavish#stupid stupid me#constructive criticism is always welcome#but dont be flat out mean#or i WILL cry#tysm love u#grandma who has used this godforsaken site for the better part of a decade but still doesnt know how to make posts#grandma will give kisses if u ask nicely#i miss my grandma
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i don't feel like trying to fix/finish this anymore so i'm just gonna post it lol
redraw of this image
#dragon ball#dragon ball z#dragon ball super#dbz fanart#gine#gine dbs#fasha#seripa#do they have a ship name#gine x fasha#gine x seripa#my art#also please let me know if i should change anything with the way i wrote the alt text! /gen#i don't use a screen reader and i don't think i personally know anyone who does#so if i need to improve anything to make it more accessible- constructive criticism is welcome!
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